Writing prompt 1
End with, "It was raining, but he didn't open his umbrella."
Well, my brain already begain *starting* with the quote, so I followed it:
The first time I saw him, it was raining, but he didn't open his umbrella.
He was crossing the street, wearing a suit and tie. His coat was open, and I wondered where he was going in such a hurry. The umbrella hung off his arm, unopened, and he held a newspaper over his head.
I started to see him more after that. Maybe he'd always been there and I'd just never noticed...he'd blended into the crowds. But now I see him everywher. Buying a paper at the corner store. Walking out of the coffee shop, carrying his coffee in a paper cup. Walking his chocolate lab in the park.
I haven't figured out where he lives. It's not like I can follow him home, see where he goes. That would be crepy. Stalkerish. Talk to him? Well, that I could do. In theory. I just never seem to find the words. We make eye contact. Smile. And then I break away, embarrassed and tongue tied.
I'm terrible at this. I met my husband in college, where you don't so much "date" as wake up one day to find yourself in a relationship. He proposed before we graduated, we got married a year later, and then we lived blissfully for the next ten years.
Or so I thought.
Well, my brain already begain *starting* with the quote, so I followed it:
The first time I saw him, it was raining, but he didn't open his umbrella.
He was crossing the street, wearing a suit and tie. His coat was open, and I wondered where he was going in such a hurry. The umbrella hung off his arm, unopened, and he held a newspaper over his head.
I started to see him more after that. Maybe he'd always been there and I'd just never noticed...he'd blended into the crowds. But now I see him everywher. Buying a paper at the corner store. Walking out of the coffee shop, carrying his coffee in a paper cup. Walking his chocolate lab in the park.
I haven't figured out where he lives. It's not like I can follow him home, see where he goes. That would be crepy. Stalkerish. Talk to him? Well, that I could do. In theory. I just never seem to find the words. We make eye contact. Smile. And then I break away, embarrassed and tongue tied.
I'm terrible at this. I met my husband in college, where you don't so much "date" as wake up one day to find yourself in a relationship. He proposed before we graduated, we got married a year later, and then we lived blissfully for the next ten years.
Or so I thought.
2 Comments:
At 9:12 AM, Anonymous said…
Wow. 6 paragraphs, and you painted the scene so clearly I can see it. And you left me wondering -- who is this guy? Who is the woman narrating? What went wrong in her marriage?
I've never used writing prompts, so I'm very intrigued to see how you do this.
At 1:45 PM, Erinna said…
Thanks, AL...what I like about using prompts is that they often take you in unexpected places. I don't know who this woman is yet, or what went wrong, but I'm interested in finding out! :)
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